The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed reading this. My only comment would be with regards to the ending... I very much like the idea of ending with "This is our boy, Joseph Chadwick Harrington" (paraphrased, I know) but I think that the statement would have more impact if surrounded by a little more legal drama and difficulties, and if Chad and Sharon's last name had been mentioned beforehand (so that the connection was instantly there).
Anyway, this was a really nice take on the subject. Thanks for sharing.
Very nice. A beautiful story and so touching. Good work.
This was a great read. I loved "Joey". He was a delightful character and the happy ending was great. Good job!