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11/24/06
So sweet and touching. This is very beautiful and I can feel the love between them. Very good job.
This story was very well written.I just lost my mother less than two months ago and I this portrait of a loving daughter and a sweet,dear mother took me back to our relationship.Thank you.
11/26/06
So tender and sweet. I love how you worked the sheet smoothing in more than one place - a very nice uniting element. Thanks for sharing.
This is so believable. My own mother said similar things when she became terminally ill. Good job of characterization. Thanks for sharing.