The Official Writing Challenge
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Absolutely love the disciption of your mom... I can picture her clearly. I very much enjoyed reading this. Nice job.
Very nice description of your mother. I can picture her so clearly. Good job!
I loved this character description! I could see and hear this lady clearly and felt as though I knew her. Colorful and original imagery throughout. I especially enjoyed "the looks of a rusty nail and a personality to match," "prostitute-orange color of her hair," and how hr voice "scratches out noises like a broken needle on an old phonograph." Great job!
Definitely clear and complete in its description of an unique person. This is very well done.