The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/06
This was incredible--you really captured the story-teller's voice. I felt as if I were a 9-year-old in the room. Very good!
11/20/06
Tyler was both a regular "physical" lifeguard and also a spiritual one! Wonderful story!
This was a really good read :^)
Oh, YAY!

Makes me want to hug Tyler.

Good Job on the win!
Great job of retelling Tyler's story. Congratulations!