The Official Writing Challenge
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11/16/06
Oooh, how original, and very good! Quite authentic sounding--I'm betting you've done some surfing.
11/16/06
Well done, a couple of techical changes but the storyline was well crafted. Thank you for sharing.
This is a nice change of pace from most entries this week. Adding the dolphin was the added touch.
11/23/06
Author's note: Though I used to like watching surfing on tv as a youngster, I'm not exactly athletic and have never tried surfing myself. I'm excited that this ranked 8th in Beginners. Thanks!