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Very nice! She is truly a Prodigal Daughter. This is a touching story. Nice job.
What a wonderful tale of a prodigal brought home! I love that you didn't tell what she'd been doing - makes this applicable to anyone! Keep writing.
I love stories that tap into the wisdom of the elderly.

Some of your dialog seemed a bit stilted, perhaps, but that's easy to edit.

Great characters, and a lovely story.
Your intro paragraph set the lovely mood of this story. I always love a prodigal story. This one is unique in that it is of a granddaughter returning to her grandmother. This story is nicely written but could perhaps be tightened up a bit. I enjoyed this story and hope that it will reach others who need to hear its message. Great job!
Oh, this was wonderful. It seemed so genuine and real. Great job at capturing the emotions of the situation.
Amy? Good Job. I think a lot of people waiting for someone to 'come home' could identify with the grandma.