The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/06
Lots of great stuff here--just a few edits to polish it up and you'll have quite a gripping story.
11/18/06
This definitely kept my attention through the whole story. Your words are very descriptive and conveyed the intensity of his emotions. Good work.
11/18/06
A very moving account of how often we reach out to others with expectations of our own rather than simply touching a life and trusting the rest to the Lord. We become enraged when the person we perceived ourselves to have "saved" returns to the shadows from which "we" saved them!
11/20/06
Beautiful writing! The story captivated me and the desriptive wording was wonderful. A unique take on the tpoic! Loved it!