The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 610 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
11/17/06
Lots of great stuff here--just a few edits to polish it up and you'll have quite a gripping story.
11/18/06
This definitely kept my attention through the whole story. Your words are very descriptive and conveyed the intensity of his emotions. Good work.
11/18/06
A very moving account of how often we reach out to others with expectations of our own rather than simply touching a life and trusting the rest to the Lord. We become enraged when the person we perceived ourselves to have "saved" returns to the shadows from which "we" saved them!
Beautiful writing! The story captivated me and the desriptive wording was wonderful. A unique take on the tpoic! Loved it!