The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/06
RC - okay I didn't guess it. ;-|
Good story - provoked my curiosity and held on.
Note: blank lines will make this much more readable and reader-friendly.
11/17/06
This story definitely kept my interest. Very well crafted and sweet. I agree about spacing out your paragraphs, but this was a delightful read nonetheless!
11/17/06
This is very tenderly written, although probably weak on topic. Your characters are fully developed and engaging. Good job!
11/18/06
A very nice and touching story. What a sweet relationship between the boy and his grandpa, as well as with his dog. I enjoyed this very much.
I'm reading some of the older challenges. This one is really great! Loved the bonding that was expressed here. Good article
This was a pure delight to read--your descriptions lyrical and your story rounded out perfectly.
07/05/07
I remembered reading this when you first posted it as soon as I finished the first paragraph. If that isn't a testament to its impact, I don't know what is. Wonderful for a first entry - or any entry!
07/06/07
You can really tell a story - an amazing gift for drawing in the reader (paragraph breaks and all) :)