The Official Writing Challenge
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What an exciting story! Think about writing a full-length version of it some day.

Be careful with punctuation (seas, not sea's) and capitalization (Lord, not lord).

Thanks for sharing this with us!
A wonderful story of the Lord's protection! Keep writing!
Good story, could have used a bit more detail, though. Maybe a little about what you do or what the area looked like. This usually adds a bit to a story while keeping it's original context accurate. I'm glad the God kept you safe.
I love hearing God stories. Your way of morphing a traditional lifeguard into Jesus as guarding our lives is refreshing. Thank you for sharing.
Great story! It shows us that God is always with us every step of the way.
Great story. Needs to be broken down into paragraphs with spacing. The Lord's name needs to be capitalized...and some editing...but really a very nice true to life story of Jesus love. Keep at it...practice makes perfect.
Thank you for sharing your story. Perhaps next time you can expand it a bit and help us to "see" the story unfold. Keep writing!