The Official Writing Challenge
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I really like the letter format--letter-writing has become a lost art! And it almost read like the narration of a slide show. A few typos to clean up--and it's perhaps a bit weak on topic. But I thoroughly enjoyed reading this vacation narration.
Not sure the story fit the topic, but nonetheless I was curious to read what would happen next. I also enjoyed the letter writing style and the spiritual journey. I did need to reread a couple of lines to understand a point. Mind you, only a couple of line, so the rest was a good read.
A very nice letter. It read like a travelogue. Very interesting to read. Keep writing!
Missed the topic of "Lifeguard", but a travelogue for the family members back home; which I'm sure they enjoyed. Thanks for sharing your travels with the family at FW.