The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the last line.Nice theme.
If only more Christians would have such a heart for people drowning in sin.Thank you for sharing your heart.
11/17/06
This reads very much like a song lyric, with chorus. I hope you'll consider having it set to music!
11/17/06
I love the title, and it's very true. I enjoyed this poem and its sincere heartcry. Nice job.
11/17/06
Beautiful display of such strong emotions. I truly liked this very much.
11/18/06
A very good reflection of what we feel as we watch the Lord do what we simply cannot!
11/23/06
This could be lyrics of a song; or free verse without the rhythm, meter and rhyme...but it has good thoughts. Thanks for sharing.