The Official Writing Challenge
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Well-written allegorical tale. It's true that many people are afraid to tell others about our great Physician.
11/10/06
I like the allegory. You had me there in the beginning. I thought you had a real physical disease. On reading on, I got your message which was cleverly delivered. Well done!
11/15/06
I liked your story. I wondered what you had until you capitalized Doctor. Good job.