The Official Writing Challenge
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11/11/06
What a beautiful and touching testimony to your mother's love and care. Your writing showed sincerity about your feelings for your mother and her devoted love and you returned that devotion in a most unburdensome way.
11/12/06
Beautiful, moving story! I felt as though I were there and could see everything happening with the vivid and specific descriptions. I liked the cycle of the one who cared for her daughter being cared for in return. Great job!
11/15/06
Very well done. A wonderful tribute to a great mom. Blessings!
This is such a beautiful tribute, so heart rending. Your words gives us a glimpse into the world and relationship of mom and child, and helps us to remember to not take our family for granted. If this is a true to life story, I am sorry for the heartache, and can relate as my mom is older now and I often ge concerned with her health and not being able to see her that much causes me sadness and homesickness sometimes.Through your illustrations of words you show how God can love through us as we become His hands who nurse in compassion and dedication. Well done and God bless you in Jesus name. Keep up the writing. You are very talented hon. :0)+- Janice
Heartwarming story. I like the way you brought in the beginning and tied it into the end. Good job.