The Official Writing Challenge
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I really like this entry. You did a really nice job of keeping the twist hidden right to the end. I certainly didn't see it coming. It sent tingles up and down my spine when I got to the end. Kudos to you!
nice twist at the end.
You "got" me, too. A great story and a lovely surprise ending. Good job!
Wowza! This is going to be one of my fave's this week. The twist ending was definitely a PLUS! I loved it. You did a great job, I almost wish there were 'episodes'with Nurse Colley. Mr. Green was also a very believeable character.
Great job :)