The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this entry. It was very well written and created a natural flow into the spiritual application.
I think this one is a winner!!
11/10/06
Good tie in with spiritual truths. I had a little girl who crawled under the table too!
11/12/06
Interesting and encouraging, but I still don't want a shot! Can I have a milkshake instead? I really enjoyed this, and the way you tied the lesson in with the story. Good work!
This was well written, I could see the little girl and feel compassion for her, and the mom as well. This was a good example of spiritual truths we at times must face. Good job.