The Official Writing Challenge
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11/11/06
A cute story. Too bad "Mom" had to meet the ruder doctor first, but it's a good thing she met the other one, isn't it? A very sweet slice of family life. Keep writing!
11/14/06
This was cute and fun to read. It was slightly choppy in a few areas, but the story itself was very interesting! Good job!