The Official Writing Challenge
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11/09/06
This was a very good article. When I saw the topic for this week, my mind went to the Katrina Hurricane, also. Keep writing everyday. Mostly what I noticed here, was commas being omitted in places and periods left off at the end of your sentences. Otherwise, good job!
11/11/06
Very good story. The only thing is the lack of punctuation. Very good though.
11/11/06
A good account of this momentous occasion. You chronicled this very well. Keep writing!