The Official Writing Challenge
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11/04/06
A nice lesson in prayer for children. Your piece seemed a touch out of focus, but you made some excellent points! A great start!
11/06/06
I was delighted by this story! It reminded me of when my own two daughters were small and attached to their stuffed animals. Great imagery with the praying bears and monkeys.

More dialog between girls and Mama and more specific prayers would bring the story even more to life. I loved the one little girl praying, "God bless God!"