The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting character study. I especially liked the opening--the description of this teacher made me see him! I especially liked the imagery of his hair as "brushstrokes" "sweeping" back from his head.

Enjoyed also such quirky details as the book entitled "The Little Fred Schoolhouse"...and the very fact that the same teacher would be nicknamed both "Sir"
and "Fred"!

He'd come even more to life for me if dialog were included in this story.