The Official Writing Challenge
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11/05/06
I love the point of this story...faithful endurance. It's when things are tough that we sometimes learn the mark of God on our lives.

I agree with the above comments...work on use of paragraphs, maybe, just take a deep breath, look at your writing after you finish and say, "Oh, this works better here!" Fit your writing together like a puzzle!