The Official Writing Challenge
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11/06/06
You did a good job. I liked the age comparisons "old enough" "young enough". Too bad he went about trying to correct the things that he didn't like in such a bitter way. Compelling - a good read. Thanks.
11/14/06
Oooh ... too close to the truth....... Great writing, dear friend!