The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
11/07/06
Creative retelling of the "separation of the sheep and goats" parable from Matthew 25.

However, there were some punctuation errors that made for some awkward, run-on sentences in paragraphs two and three. Also, your use of quotation marks wasn't consistent.

Thank you for sharing an important message through your story. Keep writing!