The Official Writing Challenge
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11/05/06
very full of passion, very full of pain. Where are you in this story, dear writer? There is a lot behind these words.
What a hard lesson from a tiny teacher! I was in that hospital room with you from beginning to end. Well-told.
11/06/06
This is a beautiful story and excellently written! I could grieve with the mother and see and hear the little girl as though I were there. I found especially vivid and powerful the line "her golden halo was replaced by blood and baldness." Wonderful imagery!

I was also moved by the message of a child's simple but profound faith. Great job!
You had me from the first sentence. This is a compassionately written and moving story. Thank you for sharing.
11/09/06
some typos and got a little confused by who was who in the begining. A worthy work that could be very good and ministering with a bit more polish.

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