The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/06
What a wonderful testimony. This does need some polishing. Good job.
11/02/06
Good, but I would have added more personal descriptions about your teacher.

Also, proof read your column out loud at least three times before submitting it, both for clarity and grammar. It took me a few years to figure out how important this is. I’m an impatient person, so I really had to struggle with this part of my writing.

That will help avoid mistakes like “Now my definition has change…”

Keep writing.

May God bless!
Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship
11/03/06
Very inspirational, I think it could have been slightly more expanded though.