The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/06
This is a nice poem.

It seems disconnected and I had trouble finding the message.

Great job.

This is really good, but when you through in personal names, you should have added more explanation.

Other than that, extremely well written.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

11/03/06
very clever! Excellent progression of how God deals with us...obviously a little personal experience here! ;-)
I love it. I could relate, too. I have gone through all 3 of those phases with 2 of my older children countless times. ;-)