The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/06
This is a nice poem.

It seems disconnected and I had trouble finding the message.

Great job.

11/02/06
This is really good, but when you through in personal names, you should have added more explanation.

Other than that, extremely well written.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

11/03/06
very clever! Excellent progression of how God deals with us...obviously a little personal experience here! ;-)
I love it. I could relate, too. I have gone through all 3 of those phases with 2 of my older children countless times. ;-)