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10/26/06
I really enjoyed how this story reminded us to be missionaries in our daily lives. Very strong language near the end. Nice job.
This was one great story. It was told very realistically, and I commend your efforts.
10/30/06
A very powerful testimony and I enjoyed reading it. Well done!
11/02/06
I agree with your message that the mission field is wherever lost people are and that we can all be used by God to help others.
Wow, you have acheived the ability to draw someone into your story with genuine interest. The story line was quite clear and well done. I actually envy Miranda in a way.