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10/26/06
I really enjoyed how this story reminded us to be missionaries in our daily lives. Very strong language near the end. Nice job.
10/27/06
This was one great story. It was told very realistically, and I commend your efforts.
10/30/06
A very powerful testimony and I enjoyed reading it. Well done!
11/02/06
I agree with your message that the mission field is wherever lost people are and that we can all be used by God to help others.
11/02/06
Wow, you have acheived the ability to draw someone into your story with genuine interest. The story line was quite clear and well done. I actually envy Miranda in a way.