The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/05
Nice, but I would have rather seen a longer piece. This was too short to be effective.

Keep writing.
God Bless.
Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship
01/24/05
This was nicely done. You could have elaborated a bit more. God bless you.
01/24/05
desiring to be merciful to others and ourself is a great goal!
01/24/05
A good beginning to what could be even better. Next time, don't stop your thoughts, encourage them to continue. You have some very good things to say that could be expanded. Great effort and thanks for sharing your love of writing. Warm wishes, Joanne
01/24/05
The first paragraph really caught my attention. The second was lost a little of the impact due to multiple bible verses. Let your writing shine through. Good start.
dido to the above. very creative. God Bless You
01/29/05
Good but a little abrupt ending, a little more and it would have made a
good write