The Official Writing Challenge
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10/27/06
What I like- great truths here. Nice ending and start. Flowed nicely.
What I might change- It would have been nice to have it a bit longer but it worked great as a short devotional piece. Maybe break the dialogue into separate paragraphs when someone new is speaking.
Great content and that part is the most important part!
10/30/06
A sweet story and a good reminder for all of us who are parents. Nice work.
10/30/06
Short & sweet & with a great message - so true! Well done.