The Official Writing Challenge
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10/27/06
What I like - the title of course - and a great opening. It drew me in. I liked the scripture you used and especially the line about the pastors and where they came from ...good thought provoking piece.:)
What I might change - the part where you say 'Come look at it with me' not sure there even though I know it is a devotional I thought hmmm is he going to preach at me...though I honestly don't know how you could develop that part. Maybe just jump into what you are going to say.
You write very well - good pace!
This was a really great devotional. :) I'll have to keep it in mind this week and thank some of the people in our church who serve, flint-like.
10/30/06
This is a good way to look at this unique phrase. It's also a good reminder to thank those who labor for His glory. Keep writing!
12/23/06
This is a first-rate take on the topic: the ultimate "Missionary," Jesus. If you don't already write a column (for your congregation's monthly newsletter, for example), you should seriously consider it. You know how to give a message, provoking your reader to think, in just a few words. Thank you!
01/31/07
Like I said, "My Tracker is Out Of Order"...didn't clue me in that you had an entry (#($^% I'm miffed. Pauly, you brought me to tears with this one! The Savior knowing beforehand the jeers, the slaps, the spit in his face... it broke my heart; and here's another phrase, "I wept like a baby." You never fail to bring it home - message-wise. Thanks.