The Official Writing Challenge
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10/27/06
What I like- this is a very warm, sweet story. You made her voice sound real and I liked how you tied the doll in.
What I might change- you probably already caught them but there were a couple of typos... and there was one line that maybe could be broken into two - 'She daily shared His love...'
Thanks for writing this~:)
10/29/06
I also enjoyed this precious and heartwarming story. The character was so real, and I enjoyed reading this very much. Good work!