The Official Writing Challenge
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10/28/06
Very nicely done. A good reminder. Keep writing!
Interesting thoughts. Be careful on your punctuation. You should be consistent on capitalizing things. You don't need to captilize things just to make emphsis on it. I noticed, for instance, the word "cross" in caps in one sentence and the next it was not. The judges look at these things. Maybe if you added a verse of scripture you could make a nice devotional thought.
Keep writing. Practice and feedback help us grow! God Bless you.
10/31/06
This was pretty good, I think it could be slightly expanded though.
Good job!