The Official Writing Challenge
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This would be great as a children's story and can even be lengthened to do a children's book.You could tell more about things that sold at the yard sale,how the kids kept in touch after they parted and even how the missionaries did in their new country.Good work
Cute story. Dawn's emotions were very realistic as she refused to help her friend move away.
10/27/06
I love this story and I'm so glad you submitted it. Well done!
Well done! Nice take on the topic and the emotions.

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