The Official Writing Challenge
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10/27/06
Very nice! How eloquently this speaks of God's mercy and grace. Keep writing!
Your title drew me in and I enjoyed your easy flow.

One thing I might change is your punctuation ie: quotes at begining and ending but I don't think they're needed on every line, periods and commas should be placed inside the quote also if you want to emphasize a word try put it in italics. (if you don't know the code to do this e-mail me and I'll send it to you)

Keep up the great work and may the Lord quide your quill as you write for the glory of HIM!
good job!