The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/06
What great dialouge! I totally enjoyed this. Noticed a typo, but was enjoying the story so much I didn't realize until I read it again! Great job!
10/27/06
fun...thank you
SO TRUE! SO TRUE! I LIKE THIS!
10/27/06
Very amusing but very true. I enjoyed reading this, but it's a good lesson for us all. Well done!
11/01/06
Great message and well-written dialogue!
11/01/06
What I like- Great dialogue! Could be a good devotion. Took truths and made it understandable for anyone. Clearly written and contects with the reader.:)
What I might change - a typo here and there:)) MAybe italicize God's words for clarity...other than that - I loved it!