The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/06
Good job. I liked your story. Your characters are believable, open to vulnerability, and they love God. Again - good job!
10/26/06
This was a great story, it held my attention from the beginning with great character development.
10/27/06
An excellent story and a triumphant ending. Well done!
This is a really good story!Great job!
Very good! Beliveable, smooth dialogue. I'm not sure why this is in beginners.
10/29/06
Certainly packed a lot of story in those words. It read to me, like the outline for a fine novel. I wanted to read so much more about each section. Yet what I read was very good. Nice!
10/29/06
Wow! I loved it!
10/29/06
As a history major, I am excited to see someone who is pursuing the historical missionaries...now I must fight the urge to go and do research. Great job--read smoothly and you had nice 'round' characters.

This has been one of my favorites.
10/29/06
Very, very good. :)
Excellent work! I'm sure I'll see you in the winner's circle.
10/31/06
Excellente! I love historical pieces and this was wonderful. Great character development, descriptions and dialogue made for an entertaining read. Terrific piece.
11/01/06
I agree with the other comments. Inspiring, well-written, thought-provoking!
11/02/06
What a riveting story! So much incredible story in so few words!! Excellent work! Praise the Lord!
Congratulations! Well deserved!
Congratulations! What a great, well-written story!