The Official Writing Challenge
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10/21/06
I so much appreciate your honesty in sharing this story!
10/22/06
A very good lesson for all of us. This was a very good story and you told it well.
10/23/06
This was right on topic. Sad to say, when we become Christians those old, 'oft-told' tales are too often retold through our 'old man' nature. Thanks for being honest, and praise God you learned to see that story through God's eyes.

One suggestion: I would have separated the article into a few more paragraphs. You could write out the dialogue between the officer and you (even if you couldn't remember it word-perfect, the idea of what went on would make the story even more interesting).

Great 'police' story and really good lesson!
As they say, experience is often life's best teacher. Great story! A suggestion, however, when quoting a thought, try italiacs.