The Official Writing Challenge
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Very emotional (I have tears in my eyes!) I loved it from the first to the last. Thanks!!!
10/21/06
What an interesting way to tackle this topic--with a hypothetical policeman! This story is just a teesy bit short of outstanding, because of a few tiny errors in spelling, punctuation, word choice--as you polish those errors, you'll quickly move up. Your writing is extremely compelling.
10/22/06
Extremely well written and very moving. You have a way with words!
10/24/06
This was fascinating. I agree with Jan - a few "fix-ups" and you'll have a winner. Good work.
Very good article. Thought provoking.