The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/06
I think we can all relate to this story, at least I can! Thank-you for sharing this.
10/21/06
I love it when life teaches lessons with spiritual applications. Thanks for this amusing story.
10/22/06
A good point, and an easy story to relate to. Well written!
10/24/06
Yep. I think everyone who reads this can tell a similar story. Well done.
I agree with this:
I usually have common sense, but I could really use some “God sense” when my emotional sense is eight months or more behind.
I really enjoyed reading this and appreciated how you drew parallels between our walk with the Lord and some of the ordinary things in our lives.
You did a great job of articulating your point with smooth transitions between the character's conversation and descriptions.
Keep on writing... well done.