The Official Writing Challenge
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LOVED this! Excellent job!
Very, very good!
Very nice story and a very good lesson to the man in it. Well done!
Terrific story with a great twist. Congratulations.
Good story! Well told! There were no 'bumps' in this story, it was smooth all the way through from begining to end. Skillfully narated with a powerful punch at the end. A truly deserved win! Keep them coming!
This is excellent! I felt the intrigue and suspense building throughout and was completely surprised at the end! It is also an excellent reminder to all that obeying the law keeps us well under God's protective covering. It reminds us as well that the Lord will sometimes step in when our foolishness takes over our good sense.
great story! glad you won! crongrats!