The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/06
This could be slightly expanded, the first few paragraphs were a little awkward. E.g. using Mary's name twice in the same sentence.
Good job though! :)
10/21/06
A wonderful lesson in the definition of mercy. A slight problem is the frequent switch in POV. If you re-visit this story, consider staying only in the POV of one of the women. Great spiritual application of a real-life situation.
10/22/06
A believable story and it was easy to see your point. Keep writing!