The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/05
Good reminder to be mindful of what is really important in life. You may want to watch where you place your commas, in order for your reader to flow more easily with your thoughts. God bless you.
01/24/05
given a heart with pure desire to please God - great line...create in us pure hearts!
01/24/05
Wonderful food for thought. Good job!
this is so true. a desire to plese God. God Bless You
01/27/05
The message is clear and well put. If we could spend quality time with our children, find time for others who need help or comfort and desire to please God, it will truly be a wonderful world.
01/29/05
Very well written and a great reminder to let our desire be to please God in all things.

Kathy
01/29/05
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