The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/06
What a great dramatization! I really enjoyed this-you made the story come alive as if I were right there!
10/22/06
Extremely well done! I love to see Bible stories come alive. I considered this topic as a possibility for my own article but am now glad I didn't do it because you did it so well! Keep writing!
10/22/06
Excellent writing.
10/23/06
Beautiful! Just beautiful! And the writing was excellent. Couldn't have asked for a better story to read...for my morning devotions. Thank you & Kudos!
10/24/06
Terrific! Loved the glimpse into the soul of Malcus. Nice work.
WOW!!! This piece belongs in the advance category! The first thing I did after reading was to go see if you placed in the winner's circle for that week. The judges are lucky they placed you otherwise they would have to deal with me! (LAUGH)

Seriously though, this entry is excellent! I long for skill such as you have demonstrated here! How you entered into Malchus' mind and took us with you is truly inspiring and your insightful descriptions are wonderful. After reading your work, your review of mine means even more to me now. Thanks for sharing, Evelyn!