The Official Writing Challenge
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Very well written! This story kept my attention from start to finish. However, I was left wondering what the moral of the story was. What did the twins learn from the experience? Yet, still I must reiterate how gripping your narrative is! You certainly have a gift. Keep writing!
10/19/06
Loved this! good Job!
10/20/06
I also am not sure I see the moral of the story, but I enjoyed reading it nonetheless. I especially liked the line "You pray while I drive" :-) Good story!
10/21/06
I agree with the comments so far. Your tale was well told and it carried me along, but the ending left me wondering. Keep writing!
10/23/06
I could just write "Ditto"...as I too enjoyed the story but saw no messsage, moral or conclusive ending. However, it kept me reading...that's a sign of a good writer.