The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/06
Good story. We so underestimate the little things that God gives us to do today that may indeed prevent a disaster tomorrow that we may never know about until we get to heaven. Good job.
10/20/06
This is very true. The little things we do may not seem great, but they are all part of God's plan for our lives. Well told!
You chose an engaging way to make your point. I loved your aside that read "He has decided, however, that he likes being called Gil." A little romantic insinuation adds some sparkle and spice. Well-written.
10/24/06
Wow. This is good, maybe one of the best I have read in this category. I loved the way you poised the whole story, his impressions, and the resulting encounter with the neighbor. Good job.
10/24/06
Nice job - looks like Gil has a winner in the girl-next-door! Personally I think you have a winner in this, too!