The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/06
A short and simple story. It could be expanded just a touch to make it more powerful by a little extra 'show' than 'tell. Good job!
10/20/06
A very sweet and heartwarming story! I was definitely drawn along by your words. Well done!
10/20/06
Lovely.
Good story. I saw a couple of spots that I thought could have been expounded upon, but altogether, quite the gripping tale.