The Official Writing Challenge
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A good effort! Needs some work on grammar and rhyme! Keep reading and keep writing!
10/19/06
Loved the title and the story. This is powerful-great last verse-though slightly out of rhythm.
This was good! I especially liked the first three stanzas!
10/20/06
A very good testimony! A little work on spelling and grammar and it would be top-notch! Good work!