The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/06
Pretty good! A little choppy here and there, but the story carried through well. A few sentences were a bit awkward, maybe try to expand on this? Just a thought! :)
10/19/06
A very nice, concise testimony. Thanks for sharing it.
10/22/06
Good job.
Wow, well done, good storyline. I have to agree with the choppy comment, but it follows through very well.
10/24/06
I like the last stanza the best. Keep the good work.