The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/06
What a creative take! This was very interesting to read. Good job!
10/12/06
I thought what a odd name "Velo", but I get it, it's "Love", good job. A few errors and spacing could be cleaned up, but cute story.
10/14/06
Lovely, inventive story. I enjoyed the gentle humour and light touch.
10/15/06
A sweet and touching story. Nicely written and a creative way to tell your story.