The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/06
Very good. I like how the person's thoughts are woven in--it is well written and interesting. Good descriptions of the person's feelings.
10/15/06
A touching story and your conviction carried me through til the end. I was moved by it and I applaud your willingness to be used of God.
10/16/06
Very well done...great kicker.
10/17/06
So vividly, and creatively, told! I love your use of that wonderful line from the book of Esther. God is good - and so is your writing! :D
10/18/06
Very well told, and I like the touch that you brought in Esther and had the MC living with her uncle :)
Pat Guy  
10/18/06
This gave me goosbumps! God DOES work in ways we don't understand and you wrote about it very well. Good job from beginning to end.
10/18/06
At one time or another, we are all called for a specific purpose. You did a good job of sharing one person's calling. A touching and enjoyable read.
10/18/06
Her sensitivity to the Spirit and her hesitations were very realistic. I enjoyed that. Good story!
10/18/06
Beautiful!
10/25/06
I really enjoyed this! I loved the content. The idea of comforting where we have been comforted was worked into the story. Great message indeed and I loved this line:
"Uncle Brian said I was a fire fighter, fighting the fires of hell to give one person a last chance to choose the destiny of their soul." It does something to my heart. Well done.
04/02/07
I see why it ranked so highly! This is one of my favorite lines in the entire Bible and I loved how you wove it all the way through. Amazing work here!!
06/14/07
Great message here. God uses his people if we will only obey. Sometimes it's hard to hear his voice, but we must if we're to accomplish our tasks.
12/22/09
Wow! A powerful story. God led me right to this piece and the words spoke to my heart.