The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good. I like how the person's thoughts are woven in--it is well written and interesting. Good descriptions of the person's feelings.
A touching story and your conviction carried me through til the end. I was moved by it and I applaud your willingness to be used of God.
Very well done...great kicker.
So vividly, and creatively, told! I love your use of that wonderful line from the book of Esther. God is good - and so is your writing! :D
Very well told, and I like the touch that you brought in Esther and had the MC living with her uncle :)
This gave me goosbumps! God DOES work in ways we don't understand and you wrote about it very well. Good job from beginning to end.
At one time or another, we are all called for a specific purpose. You did a good job of sharing one person's calling. A touching and enjoyable read.
Her sensitivity to the Spirit and her hesitations were very realistic. I enjoyed that. Good story!
I really enjoyed this! I loved the content. The idea of comforting where we have been comforted was worked into the story. Great message indeed and I loved this line:
"Uncle Brian said I was a fire fighter, fighting the fires of hell to give one person a last chance to choose the destiny of their soul." It does something to my heart. Well done.
I see why it ranked so highly! This is one of my favorite lines in the entire Bible and I loved how you wove it all the way through. Amazing work here!!
Great message here. God uses his people if we will only obey. Sometimes it's hard to hear his voice, but we must if we're to accomplish our tasks.
Wow! A powerful story. God led me right to this piece and the words spoke to my heart.