The Official Writing Challenge
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You described this spiritual b attle well, and I appreciated your approach to the topic. One minor question, though...was Crayton the devil or "an advanced engineer in the legions of the devil"? I was a little confused by that. Otherwise, great job!
10/15/06
A very well depicted spiritual war. I was drawn into the story and I enjoyed reading it. Well done!